Feedback About My Video And Further Editing

I have shown my video to my peers and the reception has been positive. One thing that has been noted though is the transition between the Google Cardboard part and the business card concept part that follows; the transition between the Google Cardboard being used, and a video being seen through it is not clear enough. All of those who watched it didn’t understand that I was trying to visualise what the viewer would see when they interacted with the Google Cardboard. Further to this, my tutor has advised me that the video needs more explanation, and that adding more words would explain the idea behind the video more clearly.

I have taken this feedback and advice on board and have now re-edited my original video to include more explanation of my idea. I’ve added in more about myself and the hook at the beginning to clearly set up the video. For the transition between Google Cardboard and the business card concept I have made it clear that what the viewer is about to see is what they would be viewing through the Google Cardboard. Below is the video with new audio added.

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